I was struggling a little to get all the transitions to work but I think I'm on the right lines here. I also missed out on fitting in one of my favourite thumbnails but as I work maybe I can get it in there later.
I really started to feel some excitement as I watched this - BUT, boring though this feedback is, I think you've actually got to commit even more so to the 'actual' way in which this animation is going to work - i.e. more inbetweens and more info in regard to how we get from predicament a to resolution z. I think you're genuinely onto a winner here but this animatic process needs more finesse, so we can really begin to talk about timings, pace, tension and release. Time for the 'animatic-deluxe' :)
Ayyyy! Sounds good to me! :) I knew it wasn't right yet but I'm glad I have it because now I really have something to work from. I look forward to having that chat with you on Monday! :D
Hey Molly,
ReplyDeleteI really started to feel some excitement as I watched this - BUT, boring though this feedback is, I think you've actually got to commit even more so to the 'actual' way in which this animation is going to work - i.e. more inbetweens and more info in regard to how we get from predicament a to resolution z. I think you're genuinely onto a winner here but this animatic process needs more finesse, so we can really begin to talk about timings, pace, tension and release. Time for the 'animatic-deluxe' :)
Ayyyy! Sounds good to me! :) I knew it wasn't right yet but I'm glad I have it because now I really have something to work from. I look forward to having that chat with you on Monday! :D
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