I'm really stuck as to what my final scene should be. I'm struggling to find the right composition and this is not good at all. I'm so confused that I'm even thinking that I may not include the gas mask idea and I don't even know whether to have it in a room or in a hallway. The only thing I know is that I want it in a house which is not that helpful at all!
Here's a load of new thumbnails that I've been doing to try and get a little more sense developed:
Here are my previous thumbnails:
I know I want the scene to include billowing cloth maybe from a window but I really don't know what to include. The gas mask doesn't look like it's working in the scenes, not in the newest thumbnails anyway. I quite liked the idea of including something grand such as a huge wardrobe/dresser thats doors are slightly ajar revealing something inside but you're not sure what. Something that dominates the room and creates an ominous shadow or tone. Also, I want there to be a powerful light source, probably through a window so I can have some powerful shadows and contrasting areas. I probably won't include the sofa and chair that I've previously made, and I don't mind as long as I can work out exactly what works and what doesn't.