Friday, 14 June 2013

Vertical Screen Image Sequences...

Dream Cleaners:



  1. Hey Molly,

    Proportion looks great - but I'm not sure about the Dream Cleaners selection. In this context, I don't think those earliest pencil drawings are going to prove impactful enough. I suggest you go for your colour tests etc. - imagery that will really fill the screen's proportions and go 'pop'; revisit this element, Molly - get more colour and charm - and I think you need to get more work into each slide and make sure that each image is really working hard for you as a 'designer' :)

    1. That sounds good to me! I wasn't whether you wanted less or more on the screen, and now I know it's more I'll grab lots of bright lovely things to show :D