This is my first rendered scene and I'm wondering if it works as an establishing shot. I think the camera movements are okay, if maybe a little fast. I need to pop back and change the light inside the cell as it wasn't pulsing here but it's an okay beginning.
Molly - I know you're keen to get on with this and move towards finishing some stuff - BUT - it would make more sense if your cloud of red blood cells could pivot/turn more naturally, as if they were moving through fluid... they just seem to scoot past as if pulled on a piece of string and it jars slightly with all the (considerable) efforts you've made to establish the living, breathing softness of your world. (Don't hate me).
ReplyDeleteThat's fine! It's why I wanted to post this up straight away so I could get some feedback. It'll be mostly no problem to do that :P
ReplyDeletelikewise - just space out those cells, so that one is sort of playing catch-up - anything to give it a more randomised behaviour.
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