Hi! been reading your latest story and this is much stronger than the previous one, as Phil suggested shorten Act 1 and any other sections you feel are not quite working but it is great to see that you have worked out a lot of your camera angles
I cant really think of any other improvements for now (Sorry!) but let me know if you want talk any extra bits over :)
Thanks Adam! I'm glad you like it, I'm actually working on shortening the acts as I'm writing this so you've obviously got great timing! XP
Feel free to just drop anything you can think of on my blog, I'm going to pop over to have a look at yours later today and see if I can be of any help :D
Hi! been reading your latest story and this is much stronger than the previous one, as Phil suggested shorten Act 1 and any other sections you feel are not quite working but it is great to see that you have worked out a lot of your camera angles
ReplyDeleteI cant really think of any other improvements for now (Sorry!) but let me know if you want talk any extra bits over :)
Thanks Adam! I'm glad you like it, I'm actually working on shortening the acts as I'm writing this so you've obviously got great timing! XP
ReplyDeleteFeel free to just drop anything you can think of on my blog, I'm going to pop over to have a look at yours later today and see if I can be of any help :D
Thanks I have a new idea and hope to refine it today but will be interested to know what you think :)
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