I've tweaked a few more scenes, mostly just tidying up transitions with the pulling scene and changing his final position in the window scene:
I'm really happy with how the animation's been developing. Again, this might be the final piece, but we'll see if I spot more things to change later :)
I've added a few more close ups and tweaked a few scenes, mostly the cloth scene and the pulling scene:
I like how the pace feels at the moment, I'm going to add a few more shots from different angles in the penultimate scene from behind, but other than that I think it's almost there :)
I think I should remove my name from the front cover and move it to the back, along with some contact details. However, I do like the matching renders :)