Final Tweaked Dream Cleaners Intro?..

I went in and added a smidge more animation to Natty and Flossy. Hopefully it's noticeable in a good way :P

@Phil, Tweaked Dream Cleaners Image Sequence *Again*...

@Phil, Tweaked Dream Cleaners Image Sequence...

Now with more colour!

Let me know if it need changing :)

Vertical Screen Image Sequences...

Dream Cleaners:

Proportion:

Business Cards and Books and Painting? Oh My!..

Lots of exciting things happening!

My very lovely and great quality business cards!

BOOKS! I HAVE MY OWN BOOKS! They're really great, except for a few pages that were cut a bit funny so I lost some text and images here and there, but I know for next time.

A little video flick through of both of the books:

And last but not least, Natty has her first coat of paint:

She's a little wibbly but it's my first attempt, she'll be much tidier when she's finished. I also managed to find the right colour for her head now! So that's great news :D

Traffic Light Turnarounds...

Re-rendered Dream Cleaners turnarounds for the vertical screens:

I'm uploading the video to Dropbox right now, but it's quite big so hopefully it'll still fit okay.

@Phil, Dropbox Success!..

The videos are now in my file on Dropbox! Let me know if they work okay or not :)

New Designers Proportion Turnaround...

Hopefully ready for New Designers:



Let me know if it needs to be any different for the screens though!

Proportion: Now in 1080p!..

It's been re-rendered as 1080p and had a few bits tweaked here and there:

New Intro Tweaks & To-Do List Update...

I've got the books and business cards ordered, I've also added motion blur and one transformation to Clarissa:

To-Do:

Proportion:

• Re-render all as 1080p.
• Re-render turnaround in correct aspect ratio.
• It's awfully fast but it's hard to slow it down when it's working with the music. Cut certain sections out or trim them down perhaps?
• The scene at 13secs camera could go up then lead into scene at 19secs then to scene at 17secs which will zoom out to see the spiral scene. scene at 21secs needs to be somewhere but not sure where yet.
• These changes could lead to a slightly longer stairs scene so the close up is not so rushed.
• The deep breath at 28secs should be longer if possible, feels too rushed.
• The final sequence needs to be more dynamic. More tweaking on the animation to make the struggle a little more violent but also more inter-cutting with close ups and different angles to build tension.

Dream Cleaners:

• Re-render turnarounds in correct aspect ratio and traffic light layout.

• Get the models finished!
• Get stickers and t shirts made if there's time.

@Alan/Phil, Website Suggestions...

I was just wondering if you knew a good website to order the business cards from?

I've just ordered my books from Blurb but there's so many websites that do business cards that I'm not really sure which to choose.

Any help is super appreciated! :)

@Phil, Business Cards!..

Contact Details with highlighted bleed area::

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Back image:

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I quite like 2, 3 and 7 for the back image and 5 or 6 for my contact details (I think the little Flossy drawing is pretty darn cute :P) Let me know what you think!

@Phil, Line Work Round 2!..

How about these:

And would 2 of each in soft cover be okay? Gonna get expensive otherwise :P

@Phil, Fixed Line Work...

How about these:

@Phil, Book Preview...

Untitled | Make Your Own Book

First Re-Tweak of Dream Cleaners Intro...

All rendered out at 1080p: