tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2767351775865621584.post5601904489145093292..comments2023-10-29T15:46:49.236+00:00Comments on Molly's Art Blog: Flossy III...Mollyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10912006967666578909noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2767351775865621584.post-88025644756972338972013-04-21T15:48:07.935+01:002013-04-21T15:48:07.935+01:00Hi Molly
I agree, Flossy the 3rd is much better a...Hi Molly<br /><br />I agree, Flossy the 3rd is much better and more controlled. However, one suggestion. Your focus recently has been correcting the head of your character but it may be worth changing the body (very slightly) to refine the overall shape now you know the head better. At the moment the body is very square (disk / parallel / flat top and bottom). It might be worth making this more 'dress' like (sideways D shape - flat at the bottom / curving towards the neck. This is a minor adjustment but avoiding 'parallel's is part of good character design. A bit of re-scaling and you could have this corrected in no time. Alan Postingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09282179748734196674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2767351775865621584.post-30441699735820435112013-04-21T09:49:43.779+01:002013-04-21T09:49:43.779+01:00Agreed Molly much better! you are very close now W...Agreed Molly much better! you are very close now Well Done :)Adam Webbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17905614077239124172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2767351775865621584.post-48394212890496311842013-04-20T22:45:11.384+01:002013-04-20T22:45:11.384+01:00Hey Phil, thanks for the feedback! Yeah, she defin...Hey Phil, thanks for the feedback! Yeah, she definitely feels much cuter now and girly now! :D I definitely agree with making the moon and stars the same colour palette as she is too, they don't need to be so bright when she turns so bright herself. I'll tackle that task tomorrow too, exciting but also nervy times indeed XPMollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10912006967666578909noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2767351775865621584.post-48680706687159663132013-04-20T22:37:06.287+01:002013-04-20T22:37:06.287+01:00Hey Molly - Flossy, the 3rd! Wow! I think this F...Hey Molly - Flossy, the 3rd! Wow! I think this Flossy feels much more controlled and girly-shy now, and I really like the spiral details. My only comment would be to make the moon and star details the same pastel range as her base colours - they're maybe a bit too showy for Flossy right now, but if you were to colour-pick from her ice-creamy range and apply, they'd feel decorative and create interest without being too 'look at me!' - and that's it from me! :)tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com